One of my Rift inspired drawings

[Haylaa]

This is my kelari bard, Lutie, hanging out on Moonshade Highlands playing a flute.

[Haylaa]

41 views and no comments? Is it that bad?

[teneightypee]

looks nice, how long it take you?

[Haylaa]

It took me a few weeks, but I take breaks from some pieces and work on other things too. Thanks for the comment!

[Jaedon97]

You know the only thing that could really make this better? More cowbell.

Or maybe some vigil, you heathen!

[Tesria]

Good pose. =)

[Mandarb]

The proportions and the pose are very well done. The tree trunks on the other hand could use a little more help ;) If you look at a tree, they don't have a flat bottom as if they were put on the ground. They branch out a little bit at the bottom where the trunk spreads into the roots. Meaning: don't make them that flat, and add a bit of shading to accentuate the unevenness.

Hope that was constructive criticism. On another note, wished I'd get proportions on human(oid)s as well as you do ;p

[Liltizzy]

It's lovely! Thank you for sharing.

I wish I could draw or paint!

[Cienn]

I have no talent with drawing, so I am always amazed at those who do and your drawing is lovely!!

I am a musician, though, and the flute is backward. A Flute is held to your right, left hand facing you, right hand facing out. Hope that helps

Edit: To be fair, Kelari may play their flutes that way, so who am I to say?

[Haylaa]

Oh wow thank you all so much! I have been thinking about revisiting this piece so the critique is very helpful! I will work more on the trees and I want to add more texture to the grass as well.

Haha Thanks Cienn, that is good to know! I have to have reference in order to draw and the stock I used to draw the pose from was holding just a stick to imitate the flute. I love getting advice though, It is always better to know how things will actually be held. Maybe I can find a way to fix it.

[Snackpacky]

Love the drawing.